Tuesday, 20 December 2011

A Smile…



It’s
Inestimable
Has potency
Elixir of life
Makes friendship even with strangers
Though don’t have much money, this makes happy
A beautiful smile is one that comes out of tears after much struggle
So many languages in the world, but smile can speak them all,
Even a baby can conceive, get rids our worries
It differs with the situation love, affection, care, jealous, fun list goes on
Give this in workplace, nice way of approach
Creates much fans for us
So it’s mandatory
Every person
Needs
This


P.S. I broke centre 21 words into 2 lines
Got inspired, also infected from Fiona’s Fibonacci Fever…
Posted by at 02:49

11 comments:

  1. Shreya20 December 2011 at 04:11

    Whoa! You did it. Great. I am still at incomplete lines, aww.. :O Poor me!

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  2. ✿Sie✿20 December 2011 at 06:14

    welcome to the group kalai..you did it..so your in now also with Fionacci fever..Ms.Fiona is really contagious tsk tsk..passins by and I'm your newest follower ;) so definitely keep on posting because I'll be back ;)

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  3. Rohit_blogger at http://floating-expressions.blogspot.in/20 December 2011 at 06:58

    loved the line "Even a baby can conceive the smiles"...and that 'got infected' is really comical:):)

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  4. SM20 December 2011 at 14:14

    beautiful smile
    keep spreading smile
    every person needs this

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  5. Lina Gustina20 December 2011 at 19:15

    Smile is powerful :)

    www.womenandperspectives.com

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  6. Anonymous20 December 2011 at 20:12

    nice theme...

    smile breaks barrier between minds...

    arrangement of lines are good

    thanks kalai

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  7. --20 December 2011 at 20:55

    Yay! You did it, Kalai! High five for the topic too! It's one thing we definitely could all use seeing more of in this world :)

    "So many languages in the world, but smile can speak them all"

    So very true! I've always thought of music as being the universal language but now I'm going to add *smiles* to the list, thanks to you :)

    I'm so proud of you because you just started writing poetry recently ~ WoW! Thank you very much for your participation and taking the time to alert my attention to this post! I hope you're feeling as proud of yourself as I am at this moment :)

    I'm leaving with a HUGE smile on my face ~ for more reasons than one :)

    Have a great day! x0x

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  8. Jeevan22 December 2011 at 01:24

    Lovely Smile :)
    Love your composition!

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  9. kalaiselvisblog22 December 2011 at 09:13

    Shreya,

    thanks buddy... ur's just amazing...
    i felt it in ur post...


    Sie,

    thanks a lot buddy.. dat really means a lot 2 me..
    sure... ur blog is very worth visiting...


    Rohit,

    thanks Rohit...glad u liked dat infected thing...


    SM,

    thank u very much buddy...


    Lina,

    yes sis... thanks...


    Krishna,

    thanks friend.. very well said..


    Fiona,

    thank u so much Fiona..
    am really happy & very proud bcoz of ur inspiration in writing dis..
    thanks a lot...


    Jeevan,

    thanks buddy... glad u loved it...

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  10. Inspector Saahab23 December 2011 at 09:35

    very beautifully penned. Fiona has indeed inspired us to join the challenge.

    and me too joined it, feel free to read my Fibonacci. posts labeled Fibonacci Sonnet :)
    stay connected :)

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  11. kalaiselvisblog29 December 2011 at 05:04

    Inspector Saahab,

    thanks a lot buddy...yeah.. u r absolutely true...

    sure i will...

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