Thursday 22 December 2011

My True Love…



You and I
Were alone
Holding me together
You were so close to me
I can feel your breathe and warm
There’s no one to mind our presence
I can see my true love right in front of me
What a wonderful feel, as Iam the world’s happiest person
What a startle, all my wishes are coming true
How come my wishes coming true always
Had a doubt, wait a minute
Where else will come true
Opened my eyes, got it
Always in
Dreams

Inspired by Fiona’s Fibonacci post…

Posted by at 04:16

16 comments:

  1. Rohit_blogger at http://floating-expressions.blogspot.in/22 December 2011 at 04:52

    packed with lovely emotions!

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  2. Prime Aque22 December 2011 at 04:59

    Wow, a signed of a good start my friend! Congrats, I a happy to know that you took the challenge too :)

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  3. ashok22 December 2011 at 06:18

    fibonacci has strict rules on the numbers...otherwise nice attempt...i know its not easy. keep it up.

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  4. kalaiselvisblog22 December 2011 at 08:59

    Rohit,

    thanks buddy...


    SB,

    Prime, thanks buddy... i seriously took in my "Smile" post... in dis i just followed the arrangement of words as liked the way...


    Ashok,

    ofcourse buddy... thanks a lot.. i followed the rules in my "Smile" post...
    dis one is just the pattern which looks like fibonacci...

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  5. SM22 December 2011 at 13:05

    beautiful poem

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  6. --22 December 2011 at 13:21

    This is such beautiful writing, Kalai! A nice adaptation of the Fibonacci! It's nice to sway from the constrictions and make it your own ~ well done! The image is breathtaking! :) **Applauding** ~ time to take a bow ;)

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  7. ✿Sie✿22 December 2011 at 17:19

    hello Kalai..I felt the emotions of your poem..and it you have chosen the right pix with it..nicely written..passing by again and Merry Christmas ;)

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  8. Urmi23 December 2011 at 00:09

    Very beautiful, romantic and touching poem. I liked the picture very much and it is perfect with the poem.
    Wish you and your family a Merry Christmas.
    You are welcome at my new posts-
    http://urmi-z-unique.blogspot.com
    http://amazing-shot.blogspot.com

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  9. Inspector Saahab23 December 2011 at 00:37

    very beautiful ! amazingly penned !

    keep coming. am a newbie here and looking forward for more from you :)

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  10. Unknown23 December 2011 at 04:48

    wow...lovely poem...beautifully written n very romantic :-)

    http://onlyfishrecipes.blogspot.com/

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  11. Shreya23 December 2011 at 10:25

    This is beautiful, one of my favorite now. Nice image selection. :) Merry Christmas :) xx

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  12. Rahul Bhatia23 December 2011 at 17:53

    Lovely poetic work Kalai!

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  13. Jeevan24 December 2011 at 01:07

    Lovely poem kalai! Liked the essence of love.

    Merry Christmas :)

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  14. Kalyan Panja24 December 2011 at 06:03

    lovely words...nicely crafted lines!

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  15. The Poet24 December 2011 at 17:33

    Hello.
    I'm visiting from Fiona's blog.

    Wonderful expressions of love. Great imagery!
    Thanks for sharing.

    Give Me Sexy, Give Me Sugar

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  16. kalaiselvisblog29 December 2011 at 05:01

    SM,

    thanks buddy...


    Reka,

    thank u so much buddy...


    Fiona,

    Thanks Fiona... ur comments r really a great compliment to me...


    Sie,

    thanks buddy... dis is wat i expected..


    Babli,

    thanks buddy...dats so sweet of u...


    Inspector Saahab,

    Welcome.. thanks 4 stopping by...
    dats a very cool comment...


    Sonali,

    thanks dear...


    Shreya,

    oh... glad u liked it very much dear...


    Rahul Bhatia,

    Thanks a lot Sir...


    Jeevan,

    thanks buddy... dats really nice...


    Kalyan,

    thanks buddy...


    Andy,

    thanks 4 dropping by my blog...
    welcome...
    thank u so much buddy...

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