Monday 5 December 2011

Unfulfilled Vows....



They both loved each other sincerely
Were called as “love birds” by some
And “Made for each other” by some

Luckily with everyone’s acknowledgement
Had their great wedding ceremony

They started their life very blissfully
But due to some vows
Made by them or their family members
Which remain unfulfilled

Created much quarrels between the couples
And the family members
Due to this misconceive
Couples life became tragedy
Leading to Divorce

Try to keep up with your promises
Never ever try to betray your partner
Even before & after your wedding

Family members
Let them have a wonderful life
Happily lived ever after….
Posted by at 19:14

14 comments:

  1. --5 December 2011 at 21:05

    Beautiful writing, Kalai! Filled with much wisdom too! Love the title and the image! :)

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  2. Jeevan5 December 2011 at 22:31

    misunderstanding is the worst thing happens between couples... Nice writeup and there's a lot the vows hold on.

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  3. SM6 December 2011 at 05:25

    understanding and communication is must.
    nice poem

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  4. Anonymous6 December 2011 at 05:35

    This is what required..but the story that you have described happens with most of the cases...

    promises should never be broken

    stay connected!!!
    its me!!! sharan :)

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  5. Shreya6 December 2011 at 08:26

    Lovely, I agree with all above comments. :) xx The title is so nice. Nice words :)

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  6. Urmi6 December 2011 at 19:02

    Title and the write up is excellent. In every relation proper communication and understanding plays a very important role.

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  7. Rahul Bhatia7 December 2011 at 04:11

    Nice read!

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  8. Arti7 December 2011 at 07:25

    Heart wrenching poem. Misunderstandings are the worst thing that can happen to any 2 persons related to each other. Beautifully written.

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  9. Kirtivasan Ganesan8 December 2011 at 23:14

    Nice read ! Nicely expressed !!

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  10. kalaiselvisblog9 December 2011 at 01:54

    Fiona,

    Thanks Fiona...thank u so much...


    Jeevan,

    s buddy... it holds a lot... thanks...


    SM,

    Thank u buddy...


    Sharan,

    most of the people will have something like this in their life... s buddy..
    u r rite..


    Shreya,

    Thanks a lot Shreya... all of ur comments means a lot to me...


    Babli,

    u r absolutely true Babli... Thank u so much...


    Rahul Bhatia,

    Thanks a lot Sir...


    Arti,

    well said buddy... Thank u Arti...


    Kirti,

    Thanks buddy...

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  11. Kalyan Panja10 December 2011 at 07:55

    lovely words...beautifully crafted lines!

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  12. kalaiselvisblog11 December 2011 at 02:10

    Kalyan,

    thanks a lot Kalyan..

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  13. Lina Gustina12 December 2011 at 01:48

    I want to live happily ever after :)

    www.womenandperspectives.com

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  14. kalaiselvisblog12 December 2011 at 02:52

    Lina,

    Thanks sis...

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